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@@ -13,25 +13,23 @@ years in England and Wales". Although the rise differs throughout the
 countries of the world, steady increase of teens involved in drug dealing is
 reported from police and investigation offices all over the world. This is
 mostly due to children being naive and so-called "drug lords" took notice on
-that, exploiting that for more profit.
+it, exploiting that for more profit.
 
-Children with generally no other obligations are lured into illegal work more
-easily than adults. This is because they are easier to manipulated and have
+Children with generally no other obligations are lured into illegal work
+easier than adults. This is because they are easier to be manipulated and have
 lots of free time, especially if their parents do not take care of them that
 much or if they are being heavily spoiled. The income, not being taxed and
 regulated, will present a huge influx of the lured kids' wealth, encouraging
 them into committing more crime.
 
-Apart from money and free time, children are sometimes exploited trough the
+Apart from money and free time, children are sometimes exploited through the
 use of blackmailing. Adult dealers present them with a horrifying situation
 that is to be evaluated should the target not complete a task.
 
 Just like young pupils sometimes start to smoke in a domino-like chain, because
-their colleagues started smoke, a bit older children start selling drugs
-for not falling out of the actions of their friends. That's a big advantage
-for attackers that will get more and more victims under their control,
-however, on the other side, public knowledge of the incidents amongst the
-population increases the chance towards someone reporting the illegal-doings
+their colleagues started to smoke, a bit older children might start selling
+drugs for not falling out of the actions of their friends. That's a big
+advantage for attackers as they will get more and more victims under their control, however, on the other side, public knowledge of the incidents amongst the population increases the chance towards someone reporting the illegal-doings
 to the investigation offices.
 
 "The only way to rid society of the trail of misery brought on by the illegal