From 57c7be76e7b0f4209b0517be4dc6c40ce73ae771 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: sijanec Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2020 11:58:07 +0100 Subject: ang reading 3 fixed grammar --- ang/readings/3/dokument.txt | 16 +++++++--------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) (limited to 'ang') diff --git a/ang/readings/3/dokument.txt b/ang/readings/3/dokument.txt index 41250a8..e5f1302 100644 --- a/ang/readings/3/dokument.txt +++ b/ang/readings/3/dokument.txt @@ -13,25 +13,23 @@ years in England and Wales". Although the rise differs throughout the countries of the world, steady increase of teens involved in drug dealing is reported from police and investigation offices all over the world. This is mostly due to children being naive and so-called "drug lords" took notice on -that, exploiting that for more profit. +it, exploiting that for more profit. -Children with generally no other obligations are lured into illegal work more -easily than adults. This is because they are easier to manipulated and have +Children with generally no other obligations are lured into illegal work +easier than adults. This is because they are easier to be manipulated and have lots of free time, especially if their parents do not take care of them that much or if they are being heavily spoiled. The income, not being taxed and regulated, will present a huge influx of the lured kids' wealth, encouraging them into committing more crime. -Apart from money and free time, children are sometimes exploited trough the +Apart from money and free time, children are sometimes exploited through the use of blackmailing. Adult dealers present them with a horrifying situation that is to be evaluated should the target not complete a task. Just like young pupils sometimes start to smoke in a domino-like chain, because -their colleagues started smoke, a bit older children start selling drugs -for not falling out of the actions of their friends. That's a big advantage -for attackers that will get more and more victims under their control, -however, on the other side, public knowledge of the incidents amongst the -population increases the chance towards someone reporting the illegal-doings +their colleagues started to smoke, a bit older children might start selling +drugs for not falling out of the actions of their friends. That's a big +advantage for attackers as they will get more and more victims under their control, however, on the other side, public knowledge of the incidents amongst the population increases the chance towards someone reporting the illegal-doings to the investigation offices. "The only way to rid society of the trail of misery brought on by the illegal -- cgit v1.2.3