From df1edd76f66b33eabe72cc7cbf656fddf7f72bea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrea Greco Date: Tue, 10 Oct 2023 12:13:49 +0200 Subject: Correct (hopefully) all grammar mistakes and change phrasing to make things easier to understand (#282) * First part of grammar correction * Final part of grammar correction * Update _ont/ont-fs-com-gpon-onu-stick-with-mac.md Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> * Update _ont/ont-fs-com-gpon-onu-stick-with-mac.md Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> --------- Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> --- _ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to '_ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md') diff --git a/_ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md b/_ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md index adc2482..deecb29 100644 --- a/_ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md +++ b/_ont/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ The stick has a TTL 3.3v UART console (configured as 115200 8-N-1) that can be a This stick supports dual boot. -`k0` and `r0` respectively contain the kernel and firmware of the first image, `k1` and `r1` the kernel and firmware of the second one +`k0` and `r0` respectively contain kernel and firmware of the first image, while `k1` and `r1` contain kernel and firmware of the second one. {% include_relative ont-luna-sdk-useful-commands.md flash='/etc/scripts/flash' @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ From the PC to the stick: {% include alert.html content="Only the inactive image can be flashed, change sw_versionX and sw_commit X based on the bank you have flashed" alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} -So mtd4/5 if you are on image1, mtd6/7 if you are on image0. +Flash mtd4/5 if you are on image1, mtd6/7 if you are on image0. The following commands are used to flash a new rootfs to image1 and then boot to it ```sh @@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ esac ``` ## Increasing the length of the software version from 13 to 14 characters -`omci_app` has an hard-coded limit of 13 characters for the software version, which is too low. We can binary patch it to increase it to 14 (or more, if you dare/need) +`omci_app` has a hard-coded limit of 13 characters for the software version, which is too low. We can binary patch it to increase it to 14 (or more, if you dare/need) ``` JVhEWjAwNCUAAAAIAAgACAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABvbWNpX2FwcG9tY2lfYXBwH4sIAAAAAAAA AwMAAAAAAAAAAAAfiwgAAAAAAAADY2BoYGZgYFjh9Uq/aNcZQdXsOh3R5ktr/fd0sTEwcuTnJmfG @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ reboot ``` 1. The binary log will be placed inside: `/tmp/omcilog` 2. You can convert it into a .pcap file using [omcilog2pcap](https://github.com/hack-gpon/omcilog2pcap) -3. You can then open it with Wireshark by installing the OMCI plugin from [GitHub](https://github.com/hack-gpon/omci-wireshark-dissector) +3. You can then open it with Wireshark by installing this OMCI plugin from [GitHub](https://github.com/hack-gpon/omci-wireshark-dissector) If you want to log everything since the stick boots, you can create a custom rootfs. Place the last command inside `etc/runomci.sh` as the last line of the file -- cgit v1.2.3