From 61ed75c34975f485d4edb7310515cc607dab2cf0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrea Greco <11886092+Andreag00@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Dec 2022 17:38:58 +0100 Subject: Grammar review of the whole wiki (#54) --- _ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to '_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md') diff --git a/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md b/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md index d8c37c8..e7fb530 100644 --- a/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md +++ b/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a.md @@ -45,9 +45,9 @@ parent: Huawei Configuration: asc0=0 115200 8-N-1 -{% include alert.html content="Try PIN 10 or other GND PINs if it doesn't work with 14." alert="Note" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} +{% include alert.html content="Try PIN 10 or other GND PINs if the connection doesn't work by using PIN 14." alert="Note" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} -{% include alert.html content="Some USB TTL adapters label TX and RX pins the other way around: try to swap them if it doesn't work." alert="Note" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} +{% include alert.html content="Some USB TTL adapters label TX and RX pins the other way around: try to swap them if the connection doesn't work." alert="Note" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} ## Root procedure @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ For more info [XPONos partition layout](https://github.com/XPONos/linux_lantiq-f ## List of firmwares and files -{% include alert.html content="With the root procedure without tweezers, the firmware already on the Huawei Stick corresponds to rooted firmware in this list." alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="If the root procedure without tweezers is used, the firmware already on the Huawei Stick corresponds to rooted firmware in this list." alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} - [Carlito MTD2](https://ma5671a.s3.nl-ams.scw.cloud/mtd2.bin){: .btn } md5hash: d3cb6f7efec201b37931139feb4bb23b - [Huawei Rooted MTD2](https://ma5671a.s3.nl-ams.scw.cloud/mA5671a_root_mtd2.img){: .btn } md5hash: 3138d2dd06a32bb92bc63610fec6fcd6 @@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ cat /dev/mtdX | nc 192.168.1.11 1234 {% include alert.html content="Only the inactive image can be flashed" alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} -The follwing examples flashes a new rootfs to image1 and boots to it +The following commands are used to flash a new rootfs to image1 and then boot to it ```sh # mtd -e image1 write /tmp/rootfs.bin image1 # fw_setenv committed_image 1 @@ -160,13 +160,13 @@ The follwing examples flashes a new rootfs to image1 and boots to it # reboot ``` -{% include alert.html content="Some OLTs only want to boot from image 0 and therefore this procedure must be preceded by the following procedure with obviously inverted images" alert="Warning" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} +{% include alert.html content="Some OLTs don't like when ONTs don't boot from image 0, therefore the previous procedure must be preceded by the following procedure with inverted images, as to clone image 1 into image 0" alert="Warning" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} ## Cloning of mtd1 (image 0) into mtd5 (image 1) -{% include alert.html content="Image 0 can be flashed to image 1 while image 1 cannot be flashed to image 0 because it has larger rootfs_data" alert="Warning" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} +{% include alert.html content="Image 0 can be flashed to image 1, while image 1 cannot be flashed to image 0 because it has larger rootfs_data" alert="Warning" icon="svg-warning" color="yellow" %} -The follwing examples clones a image0 to image1 and boots to it +The following commands are used to clone image0 to image1 and then boot to it ```sh # cat /dev/mtd2 > /tmp/mtd2.bin # mtd -e image1 write /tmp/mtd2.bin image1 -- cgit v1.2.3